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I will never give up,
until our days are done.
I will never give up,
until out goes the sun.
I will never give up,
on you, and on me,
I will never give up,
Oh my sweet, why can't you see?

You mean more to me,
than anything else I posses.
And you mean more to me,
than myself; I mean less.
You mean more to me,
than the smile on my face,
and you mean more to me,
than the whole human race.

For you are my weakness,
my love, my desire.
For as long as I fight for you,
this raging heart shall never tire.
For you I will move mountains,
impossible I will defeat.
For you I will build fountains,
and I shall never retreat.

For I shall never give up,
never now, never then.
I shall never give up,
ever, ever, ever; amen.

For life is too cruel,
for two lovers apart.
It is all too short,
so I entrust you with my heart.
So take my hand,
and together we shall soar,
take my hand,
and together this world we shall abhor.

I will never give up,
until our days are done.
I will never give up,
until out goes the sun.
I will never give up,
on you, and on me,
I will never give up,
Oh my sweet, why can't you see?
A little poem I whipped up. Enjoy.
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TribalTimbo Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Student General Artist
Little? This is Awesome? HUGE! Man, and I thought my poetry was good... but it is only mediocre compared to this!
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NykiiLynn Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
very beautiful:)
very me and my boyfriend:)
very loving it:)
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corsairoftheseas Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Lovely Q_Q
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Beautyfromtheheart Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I find this magnificent,
I enjoyed reading it.
This dragged me in and made me feel it.

Amazing♥
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Bminus Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much. :)
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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