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Sleep is our charger;
sleep is our power,
sleep is our rest,
the rest of our hour.
Once in every man's life,
there comes a time,
when sleep is as gold,
rare as can be.
This is called insomnia,
and I can guarantee,
staring at the wall,
it is not a fun place to be.
Vision turns into illusion,
illusion into fear,
fear into collision,
because it seems death draws near.
Finally the sun rises,
though as if it was an eternity,
you live the next day normally,
until it sets again.
Then it begins all over,
posters turn into friends,
talking and laughing,
you hear voices all around.
Sudden movements through the house,
shadows into stalkers,
shifting in fear,
praying for the next morning to hurry here.
This is how it feels,
for Insomnia to kick,
to rip you apart,
to be an Insomniac.
-MICHAEL ELLlOTT
sleep is our power,
sleep is our rest,
the rest of our hour.
Once in every man's life,
there comes a time,
when sleep is as gold,
rare as can be.
This is called insomnia,
and I can guarantee,
staring at the wall,
it is not a fun place to be.
Vision turns into illusion,
illusion into fear,
fear into collision,
because it seems death draws near.
Finally the sun rises,
though as if it was an eternity,
you live the next day normally,
until it sets again.
Then it begins all over,
posters turn into friends,
talking and laughing,
you hear voices all around.
Sudden movements through the house,
shadows into stalkers,
shifting in fear,
praying for the next morning to hurry here.
This is how it feels,
for Insomnia to kick,
to rip you apart,
to be an Insomniac.
-MICHAEL ELLlOTT
Literature
I have hope.
My life is hell.
Well that's the nice way of putting it.
Pure and utter hell,
Since I was five years old.
I'm almost sixteen now
And it's still hell
Every day my parents would beat me,
Over the littlest mistakes.
My best friend betrayed me
And left me to suffer on my own.
When my best friend left me
So did everyone else.
I was all alone
Betrayed by everyone.
So I think it's safe to say
My childhood sucked.
Now I am sixteen.
I have a boyfriend;
Everyone is against it though
And I have no idea why.
I love him, he gives me hope.
Is that really so bad?
He's the only one
Who fights for me.
Why can't I be happy with him,
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Literature
Your life
People will be there at every corner to criticize you
To push you around
Laugh at you
Break your trust
But you cannot lose hope m'dear
Because it's a test
A test which will be a bit lengthy
But when it finishes
The results will be great
Life is a test
No matter how hard it gets
No matter how many times you fall
Just remember
I'll be there to pick you up
Make you strong
And support you
Till the very end
Because this world is just a mere illusion
In the end you'll be the only one you can trust
So why care what others think
Do what makes you happy
And live your life to the fullest
Because you get only one chance to live it
Literature
Longing
I feel a longing
something i can't shake
maybe a sense of belonging
but that would make me fake.
It's something that is big
it would cause great change.
And i don't wish to be reneged.
Or appear to other's as strange.
But that is insignificant
My days would shine like the sun.
Life would be magnificent.
But where is my someone?
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Just a quick little poem I whipped up out of nowhere. I went through a stage of minor insomnia, and what I wrote is pretty much what I witnessed.
Hope you enjoy it.
UPDATE: This is being entered into PoetryLive's Struggling contest. Wish me luck.
Hope you enjoy it.
UPDATE: This is being entered into PoetryLive's Struggling contest. Wish me luck.
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Wow, this is really good. I happen to be an insomniac, and this shows what it really is like to experience it.
I'm thinking of drawing a JTHM picture that would go wonderfully with this poem. If I do, would you mind if I placed it as the background, or featured it in there somewhere??
I'll give you the proper credit, don't worry.
I'm thinking of drawing a JTHM picture that would go wonderfully with this poem. If I do, would you mind if I placed it as the background, or featured it in there somewhere??
I'll give you the proper credit, don't worry.